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Welcome to Space 17's Writing Blog. We are a year 5 & 6 classroom at Kawaha Point Primary School. We would like to share some of our writing we do at school with you. Some of our writing will be written straight onto our blog, so our spelling and grammar might not always be perfect. If you like what you see/read please leave a comment.

Thursday, 16 June 2011

Water Droplets Adventure

Its was just 4 days ago when I was living a life in a white fluffy cloud, just laying back and looking at the sun until DARKNESS takes over “ AHHHHHHHH!”

People said this day would come, but I never thought it really would. Then suddenly I realised that night below my feet was a long lonely stream with many leaf carts racing each other.

Finally I landed on one of the carts. But something wasn’t right. It was more than a stream; it was more like a forest. I was in the dark green forest and floating on a leaf boat travelling through the stream with no idea where I was going.

Later on I suddenly came to a holt. We were at the end. Meanwhile I was in dream-land it was a miracle I had found a whole field of glistening water being lifted into the air and went flying across the sky to there home cloud.

So I went and joined them and it was like, it was airborne. Eventually that miracle was over and I was back home. But I have a feeling that this trip will happen many more times like it just did in this one but a different way I hope.

The next time came but this time was even worse I was slurped up by a bird and I slithered down its pink silvery throat. The rest is too horrible to talk about so it’s better not to. But one more thing before I go you should go and check out the museum if you want to know more.

By Rebecca


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