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Welcome to Space 17's Writing Blog. We are a year 5 & 6 classroom at Kawaha Point Primary School. We would like to share some of our writing we do at school with you. Some of our writing will be written straight onto our blog, so our spelling and grammar might not always be perfect. If you like what you see/read please leave a comment.

Thursday, 16 June 2011

Falling Down

I was floating high in the sky minding my own business and suddenly a shiver ran up my spine. I realised the sun was slowly drifting away. It was replaced with a loud clap of the thunder and the clear blue sky turned grey as if it was angry or something. Next thing I knew I was falling out of the sky and away from my beloved home.

I turned out of the sky and when I reached earth I hit the hard rock ground in record time.

I stood up and looked around trying to make out what was where and what was what. Anyway I started to wonder off not knowing where to go. I reached a huge log and wondered how I could pass it. I decided to jump over it and the rest of the way I jumped, slid and took rides with all sorts of things.

I saw a speck of the dim sunlight gleaming through the tall unstable trees, so I let the sunlight guide me towards it.

When I got out of the forest I fell into deep ditch of water. The sun shone brightly over the crystal clear water and then my water droplet body rose up and up to the clouds where he first started.

When I got back the first thing I did was tell my raindrop friend about my amazing adventure I had just completed.

By Sinead

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