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Welcome to Space 17's Writing Blog. We are a year 5 & 6 classroom at Kawaha Point Primary School. We would like to share some of our writing we do at school with you. Some of our writing will be written straight onto our blog, so our spelling and grammar might not always be perfect. If you like what you see/read please leave a comment.

Thursday, 16 June 2011

My Adventure

Here I am in the middle of the forest. I just wish I was back home. Ok I will tell you how it all started. I was playing when the school bullies came and I said, “what do you want?” “Nothing!” they said. Suddenly they charged at me I fell out of my cloud.

When I landed I saw Eli beside me, that’s it I thought to myself I’m in the middle of nowhere with my cousin Eli.

Suddenly people came they were soldiers, they picked me up and put me in their mouth. It was awful. You will not believe what it was like in there. It was horrible. There were bugs and slugs and crawly things. Before I knew it I was coming out of the place that you don’t want to know it was horrible!

Now I was in the river. I was floating to the sea, but a big gust of wind got me and I started to fly back up to the sky. Yah! I was home again.

By Ben

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