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Welcome to Space 17's Writing Blog. We are a year 5 & 6 classroom at Kawaha Point Primary School. We would like to share some of our writing we do at school with you. Some of our writing will be written straight onto our blog, so our spelling and grammar might not always be perfect. If you like what you see/read please leave a comment.

Sunday 19 June 2011

Cross Country 2011

Boom! Boom! Boom! My chest was pounding as I got ready to have a race. I was scared to go and race.

I thought I was going to lose to the race, but I was wrong. I was in the front. We had to do two laps. I was so happy Iwas going to win.

My dad was at the end of the race to tell us where to go around the tree and Bens mum said to go through the cones and over the fence.

I was on my second lap and keegan was coming second in the race. But I was sprtting to win the race! It was over.

I told my dad that I came first in the race. He was proud of me and my borther.

By Te Poho

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