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Welcome to Space 17's Writing Blog. We are a year 5 & 6 classroom at Kawaha Point Primary School. We would like to share some of our writing we do at school with you. Some of our writing will be written straight onto our blog, so our spelling and grammar might not always be perfect. If you like what you see/read please leave a comment.

Thursday 1 September 2011

The Monkey Saves the day!

I was in the jungle swinging to vine to vine at night with wolves’ running with me to run away from the hunters.

“The hunters are coming to shoot us!” I yelled. “So we need to get away from the hunters!”

We ran as far as we could we ran to the driest place in the jungle.

All of a sudden it started raining and became muddy. It was not fun at all now we were sad.

We were walking until nighttime and we were thirsty. We stopped and fell on the ground. We found a place to sleep in.

It was the morning when we woke up and walked to the lion king jungle.

We ran to the lion king and said “lion king can you help the jungle? The hunters are back and are shooting the animals up!”

“Run to the jungle monkey, when you are there have an invisible drink to turn you into an invisible monkey” replied the Lion King.

We were in the jungle. I was invisible and punched the hunter as hard as I could.

He was knocked out.

I the little monkey had saved the day and the animals sang a victory song for the monkey.

1 comment:

  1. i loved your story it looked like you put lots of effert into it?

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