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Welcome to Space 17's Writing Blog. We are a year 5 & 6 classroom at Kawaha Point Primary School. We would like to share some of our writing we do at school with you. Some of our writing will be written straight onto our blog, so our spelling and grammar might not always be perfect. If you like what you see/read please leave a comment.

Friday, 8 July 2011

The Winter Tree

Swish! The wind blew softly through the dark haunted, frosty tree with a violet sunrise in the distance. There was crackling frost on the dark green meadow floor. I could feel the icy cold breeze brushing into my face. It felt like I was frozen.

I walked out on to the dark crunching dew with my bear feet. Through the misty fog I stared down o the haunted tree.

I looked up and saw the rustling branches in the high tree.

Shivers crept down my back. I knew something was wrong and I slowly crept backwards towards my house and sat down by the fire.

By Ivan
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